LiNaK37's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shady on Parade]

Good job

Yesterday I was at the store and I saw Candlejack, he was wa

[K7 - Dystopia]

Well

The main melody at the beggining and end gets pretty annoying, and the strings need to be softer. The drums are too organic sounding for techno and the pattern doesn't change up enough, sounds like more of a dnb pattern. However, at around 1:40 there's a nice melody, but it gets kind of overtaken by some of the other stuff, may I suggest you try mastering better? Overall it's decent, but nothing special.

[K7 - Hypnotika]

Sounds okay but...

the sound that comes in at about 13 seconds in is a bit too overpowering, not to mention that this beat is simple for Trance, let alone Techno. You have a nice melody at aout 2:04 but it's short lived, this song could have easily been 5 minutes. So in summary:

1. Techno usually has halfway complex drum patterns that are changing, so work on that

2. Don't overpower the mix with tube-ish sounds

[Base and Clap]

Err

Starts out with a basic beat and goes into a dissonant bass/melody thing. Maybe you should try to learn about chords and scales, that would help you A LOT.

DJRandomiize responds:

i like this song :(

[Beat Technology]

Not to sound mean but...

it sounds like a child messing around on a keyboard. If you need some help, I can try once I get fl studio again

DJRandomiize responds:

its my first song i made so it is very crap i know

[Sky!]

Overboard

Too much shit in this song, it's like a pollution of sound

DJRandomiize responds:

meh

[Rave Disaster]

Yeah

At first it sounds like it's going to be decent, but then it just goes to an arythmic melody that is, like on most of your songs, dissonant.

[Techno Fantasy]

Yeah

The melody is very, very dissonant, not to mention the fact that this song is very repetitive.

DJRandomiize responds:

well its techhno its supose to be repetative

[Evil-Dog - Outbreak]

Beautiful

This song is marvelous, especially when riding around at night in a rural area, where there's no light. It's truly and utterly breathtaking, and it's one of the best songs I've ever heard. I just want to thank you for producing such a masterpiece, a wonderful work that blows me away every time I listen to this magical piece of audio, it's a magnificent creation that stimulates my senses in an extraordinary way, and I want you to believe, and I want you to know, that bringing an idea this great to fruition is no small feat and should not be treated as such, for it is a wonderful thing. I want to thank you, and congratulate you, on bringing such a brilliant work to life.

tl;dr: Good Job

Evil-Dog responds:

damn that's a nice review :D thanks a lot, it's much appreciated! I'm glad I could reach your imagination with my music
cheers

[[Owl]*]

It's nice

But it's kinda boring

Solkrieg responds:

It's just a remake of the original song.